Wednesday, December 21, 2011

There's a crescent on the moon.

There's a crescent on the moon,
from where your face shimmers a smile.
Mellow zephyrs caress desires,
winter whispers modestly beguile.
I see your moon dust drizzle,
and blame this tempest night senile.
Yet still reach out my hands, hoping

perhaps you'd serenade me to your isle.
I reckon they perhaps wonder,
what is she - ludicrous? juvenile?
But there's a crescent on the moon,
and I've been watching all this while.

17 conjurers in all:

Suruchi said...

Romancing words again Cin...
Great to see these little appearances and the strength and intensity in the words still the same...

could feel you serenading with the flow, for happy times to begin:-)

Cяystal said...

Ludicrous. Juvenile.
Your choice of words is so intelligent.

☆ Rià ღ said...

This was so roamntic...being a Cancerian, we have this very interesting connection with the moon, isnt it!

Cinderella said...

@ Su : For happy times to begin. :)

Cinderella said...

@ Crystal : Thanks baccha. :)

Cinderella said...

@ Ri : Thanks Ri, though I dont know much about Cancerians and moons, my knowledge of astrology is pretty poor.

The unsure ascetic said...

nice words cindy, i am back here in blogsville after a hiatus.. u remeber me?

Tanvi said...

Oh! Lovely! I am on a holiday (I know! :P) and I want someone to serenade me right now with your poem!

♡ from © tanvii.com

Prehistoric Developments! said...

The flow was great!
Loved reading it

And the moon, FTW! :D

♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪ said...

I loved it!! I can't stop reading it over and over again!

Cinderella said...

@ Unsure Ascetic : I do remember you. And thankyou. :)

Cinderella said...

@ Tanvi : You are still on holiday!! Lucky lucky girl.

Want some serenading?
I am sure Mr. Fabulous is listening.
:)

Cinderella said...

@ PD : Thanks. Whats FTW btw?

Cinderella said...

@ Happy Go Lucky : :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

And I can't take my eyes off of you

You've always amazed me with the wordplay you've done, and the feelings expressed.

Beautiful, it is.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Rachit said...

romantic chores :)

Weakest LINK

Alka Gurha said...

The pic and the poetry matched perfectly...what an evocative piece.